Post by julius on Mar 3, 2008 20:25:36 GMT -5
Hey there. I am new to this site, and so far, found the plot as interesting as it could be. I noticed this board as I was looking around and saw something strange for a coder like the admin to do.
The Information box seems to be quite cluttered together with the plot Summary. It also does not have a title like the others. I suggest breaking it done to paragraphs iwth a title saying plot. here is the code I have done for it already if you are interested.
The Information box seems to be quite cluttered together with the plot Summary. It also does not have a title like the others. I suggest breaking it done to paragraphs iwth a title saying plot. here is the code I have done for it already if you are interested.
<font size=2><center><b>Site's Plot</b><br></center>
<font size=1><center>11 year old Victoire Weasley had never been the klutzy type. Everyone had always described her as daring and vivacious. That’s why when Teddy Lupin, the boy she’s had a crush on for forever, dared her to run into the Forbidden forest, retrieve one of the pretty pebbles and bring it back with her, she did the task; and a whole lot more. <br><br>
It seems that day, Victoire picked up the infamous resurrection stone that Harry Potter had left so many years ago in the forest. But this is where the klutzy part comes in... while running back to where Teddy stood, she tripped, and smashed the tiny stone, creating a blinding light... and all the order members who died in the first and second wars. <br><Br>
Since Harry Potter was the last person to touch the stone before Victoire, all the people who fought on his side were revived. But right after their revival there was mystery concerning the stone... why were such people as Peter Pettigrew, or even stranger Bellatrix Lestrange revived? <br><br>
Now, the story takes place 14 years after the revival of all those heroes... after everything settled down so much that not even an evil society like the death eaters had been formed, after their lives began to develop and things started to finally settle the way things had always intended them to be... right?</font></center></font>